张剑 曾鸣《考研英语最后冲刺8套题》答疑专贴（已经开始作文修改了）

谢谢分享啊！

谢谢楼主！

谢谢了啊

thank you

非常辛苦！太感谢了！

老师，第六套试卷 劳烦修改
Dear Bob,
I am writing this letter to inform you that I wish to express my sincere apologies to you.
To begin with, I take this opportunity to express my heartfelt appreciation to the invitation. This is indeed a good chance for me to communicate with you young people. Unfortunately, I have an important seminar which has been arranged last week to discuss the cultural development both nationally and internationally. So I am afraid that I can not attend your English speech contest. Last but not least, I strongly recommend Professor Wang who is one of my colleagues and who is also well-known in the field of English literature research to be the judge of your competition.
I hope the settlement of the matter will meet your wishes. I am looking forward to your favorable reply at your earliest convenience.
                                                           Yours truly,
                                                           Li Ming

As is vividly depicted in the drawings, an adolescent is giving the delicious food to his father to eat. As soon as the old father gets the food, he takes it to his lovely grandson. Immediately, the little boy gives it back to his father who is very pleased to see this phenomenon. Obviously, this set of drawings do reflect a harmonious family consisted by a little boy, his father and grandpa.
Simple as it is, what the drawings convey to us is thought-provoking. As a country with more than five thousand years’ history, respecting the old has always been the traditional virtue of Chinese culture. Unfortunately, with the speedy development of economy and society, a vast majority of senior citizens are ill-treated by their own children. First and foremost, Some young people shirk their duty of taking care the old due to their own interests. Moreover, while some adolescents enjoy their comfortable lives, their old and helpless parents are neglected and reduced to utter poverty.
Accordingly, it is imperative for us to take drastic measures. To begin with, relevant laws and regulations must be made to severely punish those who shun their responsibility of caring the old. In addition, we should cultivate the awareness of adolescents that respecting the old is of utmost significance to us. Only in this way can our society become more harmonious to live in.

第五套的作文，看了答案，感觉写得不太对头，望老师修改下，劳烦了。
小作文
Dear Sir,
  I am writing this letter for the purpose of thanking you for your warm
hospitality when receiving me last week.During the entire visit,I was
impressed by your enthusiasm which could be illustrated by showing me around
your campus,offering me several bottels of water when urgently needed and
informing me of the ancient history of your university.What makes me more
touched is that you arranged me a chance provided by your tutor to attend one
class of your unicersity.That part would be kept in my mind,for it reminded
me of the difference between our college.
  I am so grateful for what you did for me,and Iwould be delighted to give
you a impressive visit here.Please call me when you are planning to come to
my school.
  yours faithfully,
  LiMing

大作文：
  One can not help but be shocked by these two pictures which make a strong contrast.In the first one,the farmer was so delighted that an official of the government provided him several mounts of money in order to relief the poverty.On the contrary,when the technican offered him technology and knowledge,the farmer shaked his hands,conveying the meaning of refusement.
  Apparently,we can deduce from these pictures that the role of knowledge is overlooked and underestimated in the progress of reducing poverty.The first reason on accout of this weird phenomenon is the sense of value rooted in the mass for almost thousands of years.The general universally considers money more powerful and profitable than knowledge by overlooking its potentials.Other reasons could be drawn such as results of conceptions,lack of publicity and short of input.
  In this highly-civilization society,the realization that knowledge becomes a key role of alliviating poverty should be increased.To begin with,more publicity on the effect of knowledge should be made though the mass medium especially on the Internet.Secondly,the government should provided technical guidiance,employ service and trainings in agriculture skills helping the poor out of poverty.Last but not least,long-run education should be emphasized to open up our mind.

谢谢楼主，辛苦了！！！

xiexiele

辛苦楼主~！~！~！~！~