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study 发表于 08-8-26 08:28:25 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
常用于开头的句型:
对立法:
When asked about…, most people say
When it comes to…, some people think
There is a public debate today
Now, it is widely believed
Many of us believe that
To the general public
Now a lot of people feel
In reaction to the idea, some people say
… is a common way of…, but is it a wise one
these days we often hear about
we are often shown these days
现象法:
Recently the phenomenon has aroused wide concern
Recently the problem has been brought into focus
Many nations have been faced with the problem
One of the searching questions facing our world is
One of the biggest issues many people talk about is
Now most dangerous for our society is
Inflation is another bitter truth we have to face now
An acute shortage of…is now under way
Here and there across the country
Now in many big cities
With the rapid development of
Nowadays there is a growing tendency
In recent few years there is a sudden increase
Any visitor to this city would be surprised
Whenever you see…, you cannot help
观点法:
Nothing is more dangerous than
Nowhere in history has the issue been more visible
It is time we exploded the myth
Perhaps we should rethink the idea
Now people are beginning to realize
Now there is a growing awareness
We might marvel at the progress
引用法:
One of the great early writers said
“Knowledge is power.” Such is the remark of
“…” That’s how one official complained
“…” The same idea is voiced by
“…” How often we hear such words like those
比较法:
For years it had been viewed as…But now
People used to think… But things are different
Several years ago, people…Now
After a good many years of efforts…, people begin
It is a traditional way to… But now the pendulum
Throughout our lives
In recent years, there is a steady shift
故事法:
Last Sunday I… The story is not rare
Once in a street, … The problem has drawn public attention
I have a friend who…Such a dilemma we often meet
Once upon a time…The story still has a realistic significance
A factory worker who…
问题法:
Should…? Opinions vary greatly
What do you think…?
Why…? Many people pose the question like this
Why?… of all the complaints
常用于结尾的句型:
结论性:
From what has been discussed above, we may draw the conclusion
The evidence upon all sides points to
In summary, it is important
In conclusion, I would like to say
The real lesson to be learnt
后果性:
We must search for a quick action, because if
Obviously, if we ignore the problem, it is likely
Any person who ignores the warning would
We need to take a second look at…, otherwise
号召性:
It might be time to take the warning
It is time that we urged an end to
It is necessary that steps should be taken
There is no doubt that attention must be paid
Obviously…If we are to…, it is essential
沙发
 楼主| study 发表于 08-8-26 08:28:55 | 只看该作者
建议性:
It is hoped that efforts be made
In short, we should
What we need is
It is high time… Here are a few examples
While it cannot be solved immediately, still there are ways
Awareness of the problem is the first step
If we are to succeed as a people
方向性:
Many solutions are being offered here
There is no easy method, but…might be helpful
No easy method is at hand, but…might be the first step
One’s first reaction to such suggestions
What will happen to…? One thing is certain
To…is not an easy job, and it requires a different outlook
It is clear that the task demands great efforts
We have done…But we will achieve more if
True, there may be questions we can not answer
The great challenge today is
We may have a long way to go before
There is no better time to start than
It remains to be seen whether
意义性:
Following these methods may not.., but the pay-off might be worth the effort
Certainly,…but it will
The importance cannot be overemphasized
Anyhow it has a far-reaching influence
To participate in…is an experience…
The problem is something no one can avoid
We are now entering a new era which calls for
Anyhow, whether it is good or not, one thing is certain
引言性:
Edison is right in saying
A long time ago, a great man said
…, says a great man
If we want to achieve our success
I agree with the writer
As Lincoln once remarked
提问性:
if we consider…, is it
Can anyone really doubt
故事性:
Years ago, I heard a story
原因结果句型:
基本原因:
There are many reasons for
Why…? For one thing
It is no easy job to advance the reasons
It is fairly easy to identify the reason
The answer to this problem involves many factors
The reasons are varied. They include
Thanks to
The increase mainly stems from the fact
…partly because…, partly because
…not because…, but because
…not come from…, but from
One may attribute the change to
One tends to view the trend as a response to
One may trace this problem back to
That’s the reason why
A number of factors could account for the success
A number of factors, both individual and social, affect
These factors, coupled with the growth of…, lead to
Many factors weigh heavily for
The factors that contribute to…include
另一原因:
Among the most important reasons cited by people is
One of the most popular reasons is
Part of the explanation is
This is due to several factors
Another important reason is
Also playing a part is
…is also responsible for the change
of course, the growth is not the sole reason for
some people suggest that the fault is…
we may look into every possible reason except
it is only the surface explanation for
we may blame…, but the causes go far deeper
后果影响
There are a number of effects
The effects is evident
It will exert a profound influence
It may cause a sweeping change
The influence has not been confined to
It leaves some serious consequences
It may give rise to a host of problems
The immediate result it produces is
…is the net result

比较对照句型
两者比较:
The advantages far outweigh the disadvantages
Although A enjoys a distinct advantage
There are several advantages
The effect of comparison is heightened by
When the advantages and disadvantages are weighed
A means nothing when…is mentioned
Indeed, A carries much weight when compared with
Serious as the problem may be, it pales into insignificance
A may be…but it suffers from the disadvantages
For all the disadvantages, it has its compensating advantages
Obviously, it has both negative effects and positive effects
There are advantages and disadvantages
Like anything else, it has its faults
However, it is not without weaknesses
But is it all good? when considering the drawbacks
Nothing can equal
Nothing is more…than
…more… than is possible to
…more…than would
…is more…than
两者相同:
A is not…any more than
A is no less. Than B is
Just as A…, so B
The same is true of
Like…
A is as much as B
A and B have several things in common
A bears some resemblances to B
A…B…
A…So/Nor is B
… is like…

两者不同:
While on the one hand
A…, whereas B
A and B differ in several ways
Both…, but they differ in
What A views…, B may see
But the same cannot be applied to
In the past, …But now it is no longer
板凳
 楼主| study 发表于 08-8-26 08:29:27 | 只看该作者
批评驳斥句型:
直接驳斥:
Although…, I doubt whether the argument bears much analysis
Although the popular belief is…, a study indicates
Although the inclination is laudable, one may wonder
Although it is widely felt…, it is unlikely
Many people…, but this claim may be doubted
Most of us have been under the illusion
People tend to think… .There is no more reason to believe… than there is to think that
They may be right in asserting
In all the debate over…, one fact is overlooked
It is true…, but one point is being left out
It is true that…, but this is not to say
You may say… . It probably will
Some people suggest… . But what these people fail to understand is
Some people say… . But this doesn’t hold
There is an element of truth…, but
A close examination would reveal how
Closer scrutiny shows the claim may not be merited by
At first thought, it may seem…, but one second thoughts
Logical as these arguments
For all the claim, it is a common knowledge
As opposed to…, facts challenge the opinion
It is a common belief
We have been brought up to believe
People tend to cling to the idea
They argue that…, and that
Some people argue that… . But the opposite is usually the case
Some people assume that… . Quite the contrary
There are those who hold that… . And on the other hand, …
People object to the idea
批评分析:
To claim that… is far from being proved
To suggest…is exactly as if you
Such proposals are an assault on the value
If one advocates…, it is no good being disturbed
It makes no sense to argue for…, but object to
Them main problem with this view is
The obvious flaw in the idea is
Too much emphasis placed on…may overlook
In many cases, public dissatisfaction is unfair
What a foolish idea
The absurdity is obvious here
It is wrong to think
It is ironic that
It would be absurd to believe
There is no reason to believe
But the argument simply doesn’t hold

—an opinion desirable but short-sighted
The statement rests on the assumption
It is a good thing to… . But is it
They are not wrong to put emphasis on…, but
It is all very well to criticize…, but
It is generally believed that
It is wise… . But it is probably less wise
It would be reasonable… . Yet I’m not so sure
It is one thing to insist…, it is quite another
推理分析句型:
分析判断:
It seems quite likely
There is every chance that
It is clear that
It seems natural
It is more accurate to say
It is pretty certain
Fortunately it is often the case
It is urgently necessary to note
It is…that really matters
What surprises us most is
It is horrifying to find
There is no denying
The plain fact is that
The problem is that
No wonder that
It should come as a surprise to learn
Perhaps it is rightly said that
Of course, it would be an error to suggest
On the face of it, it sounds ridiculous. Yet it is true
We may find much to be said for
We can…, but we may never
… is measured more by…than by
To do…is not…, but rather
It does not…but
Historically, our society has taken a dim view of
In fact, … is not the bad thing it is often held to be
This is not to say that… That would be silly
Don’t get the idea that
Little is said about
Along with the awareness…comes
It is not that I don’t wish
…, so the arguments go
there are three kinds
推理论说:
If this is the case, we may
This may be true if
If…, it is simply because
If…, why shall we
Moreover, if
If half the money were spent on
Having recognized…, it follows
Of course, if you… . But as soon as
But even if it could be proved
… would be of little use unless
… may be difficult, if not impossible
No amount of indignation can
Even a minor improvement can
The smallest change can
Anyone with the least knowledge can tell
A little study of…can help
Who is to say if
It is almost impossible… without
Hardly anyone… without
You can’t… without
It doesn’t matter whether
No matter how
Whatever the causes
However urgent the need
The more…; the more
… never… let alone
细节支持句型:
举例说明:
… is often cited as an example
A good case in point is
The most dramatic example
This offers a typical example
To the familiar facts, another may be added
As an illustration, we may take
History is filled with the examples
…, for one
Consider the case of
Take, for example
I recall from my childhood
What shall we say, for example
But consider, for example,
A very similar story can be told
Such examples might be given indefinitely
I can think of no better illustration than
The case is only one example
Suppose that
Legend has it that
Let us suppose that
Just think of
Just imagine what would be like if
There is hardly a man
It is a rare man who
事实证明:
No one can deny the fact
We must face the fact
This brings out a fact
Yet it can’t change the fact
There is no justification for
The idea is hardly supported by facts
There is strong evidence that
All reliable data justify the view
Personal experience teaches me
Recent studies indicate
Tests have found that
According to an experiment
We have whole history to tell
Evidence is piling up that
Unortunately, none of the available data shows
As evidenced in the reports
While it may be true, the evidence suggests
Although…, the available information shows
Nothing could be more obvious than the evidence
You don’t have to look very far to find out the truth
No one is comfortable with the fact
This has proved to be the case
But the most surprising thing is
The most striking fact
There are instances when
Gone are the days when
One may not forget the old days
引用权威:
Wrote Edison, a great inventor
Many years ago, a writer remarked
As one scientist wrote
A noted teacher once told me
Many researchers find
数据引用:
… increased/decreased by X percent
… rose/dropped almost twice, compared with
A report estimates that the number is half the national average
… the number has more than doubled, as against
… the percentage was…  — X percent more than the 1990 level
More than three-quarters people preferred
There were a X percent decline this year, a drop of X percentage point from
The rate has reached an average of X percent
It accounts for X percent of the total
After leveling off for 3 years, the rate starts rising once again
承上启下句型:
承上阐述:
To understand the truth of…, it is important to see
To get a sense of how…, we must turn first to
To illustrate this point, let us consider
A study of… will make this point clear
But you may ask
But if
深入阐述:
But that’s only part of the story
Another equally important aspect is
Closely connected with this is
… may further be supported by
… is but one of many effects. Another is
Besides, other ways are
Moreover
… is also harmful
So does…
No less important
Not only…but also
反面阐述:
Despite the difficulty
On the other hand,
However…
Rather than
But the opposite is usually true
考研英语写作常见语言错误
I.词法错误
A. Article 冠词
(1)        a. The machines could not run and people would have to fall back on their hands to produce what are essential for them to keep alive.
b. Machines could not run and people would have to fall back on their hands to produce what are essential for them to keep alive.
(2)        a. Pollution is the biggest problem of the cities.
b. Pollution is the biggest problem of the cities.
(3)        a. The housing problem in big cities is rather a headache to both government and people.
b. The housing problem in big cities is rather a headache to both the government and people.
(4)        a. Bicycle is the most common means of transport in our country.
b. The bicycle/A bicycle is the most common means of transport in our country.
(5)        a. On the contrary, the percentages of milk and meat are on a rise.
b. On the contrary, the percentages of milk and meat are on the rise.
(6)        a. We can’t avoid being beaten by the others.
b. We can’t avoid being beaten by others.
(7)        a. And once the artificial-intelligent robots were put into use, what would these clever “people” do to their producers?
b. And once robots with artificial-intelligence were put into use, what would these clever “people” do to their producers?
(8)        a. For an example, with the wide adoption of the automatic working apparatuses, more and more people will lose their jobs in the future.
b. For example, with the wide adoption of the automatic working apparatuses, more and more people will lose their jobs in the future.
(9)        a. Almost everyday I open TV at 6:30 p.m. and wait for the news program.
b. Almost everyday I turn on the TV at 6:30 p.m. and wait for the news program.
(10)        a. Then, during the second part, we’re showed some pictures of the foreign customs.
b. Then, during the second part, we’re showed some pictures of foreign places and customs.
(11)        a. My favourite programme is called “The Animal World”, which is provided by CCTV every Sunday night.
b. My favourite programme is called “Animal World”, which is provided by CCTV every Sunday night.
(12)        a. It provides us with natural scenes and the life of all kinds of wild animals, with the explanation by the narrator.
b. It provides us with views of natural scenes and a look of the life style of all kinds of wild animals, with an explanation by the narrator.
(13)        a. Not only do the leaders of the countries visit the foreign countries, but also the common people visit abroad.
b. Not only do the leaders of countries often visit the foreign countries, but also the common people visit abroad.
(14)        a. I think they are the questions of great interest.
b. I think they are questions of great interest.
(15)        a. In short, the bad ads can be classified into two categories. One category has the bad purpose. The advertisers want to sell cigarettes, drinks, guns and so on. ...The other category of bad ads are those in which the advertiser use violence and sex to promote their sales.
b. Generally speaking, the bad ads can be classified into two categories. One category has a bad purpose. The advertisers want to sell things like cigarettes, alcohol, and guns. ...The other category of bad ads are those in which the advertiser use violence and sex to promote their sales.
(16)        a. This seems to be on fashion now.
b. This seems to be in fashion now.
(17)        a. And also, they treat the firecrackers as the heritage of the Chinese culture.
b. And also, they treat firecrackers as the heritage of the Chinese culture.
(18)        a. Finally we can teach ourselves and learn the new knowledge.
b. Finally we can teach ourselves and learn new knowledge.
(19)        a. Higher English level will help you to find a satisfactory job in the future.
b. A higher English level will help you to find a satisfactory job in the future.
(20)        a. Some students whose major is chemistry, math or physics and so on would think that when they graduate from the college they’ll not apply English any more.
b. Some students with majors like chemistry, math or physics would think that when they graduate from college they’ll not use English any more.
(21)        a. Such opinion leads to surprising waste of water.
b. Such an opinion leads to a shocking waste of water.
(22)        a. And wide spread of education is also a good reason.
b. And the wide spread of education is also a good reason.
(23)        a. The given graph tells us the changes of life expectancy and infant mortality of the developing countries in 1960 and 1990.
b. The given graph tells us the changes of life expectancy and infant mortality in the developing countries in 1960 and 1990.
(24)        a. There are other countless examples. All in all, we must keep the proverb in mind for lifetime——Practice makes perfect.
b. There are other countless examples. In a word, we must keep the proverb in mind for a lifetime——Practice makes perfect.
(25)        a. Community services as well as mass media are both golden chances to practice our ability, through which we can learn to cooperate with people, to contribute our intelligence to the society.
b. Community services is a golden chance to use our ability, through which we can learn to cooperate with people and contribute our intelligence to society.
(26)        a. I don’t think numbers have anything to do with the luck.
b. I don’t think numbers have anything to do with luck.
B. Nouns 名词
-可数名词
1)        a. Even a lot of entertainment such as TV, recording and films need electricity.
b. Even a lot of entertainment such as TV, recordings and films need electricity.
2)        a. People who suggested this said that one cause of the heavy traffic is traffic accident.
b. People who suggested this said that one cause of the heavy traffic is traffic accidents.
3)        a. Two solutions have been recommended so far, and each one has both advantage and disadvantage.
b. Two solutions have been recommended so far, and each one has both advantages and disadvantages.
4)        a. Man has lived in this world for thousands of years. They fight against nature from time to time and they survive.
b. Human beings have lived in this world for thousands of years. They have fought against nature from time to time and they have survived.
5)        a. As long as we don’t give up and believe in ourselves, and in the meantime learn something from failure, we’ll certainly make our marks in the end.
b. As long as we don’t give up keeping believing in ourselves, and in the meantime learn something from failure, we’ll certainly make our mark in the end.
6)        a. With money we can travel widely and have more experience.
b. With money we can travel widely and have more experiences.
7)        a. What money will ring you depends on your personal belief and goal in life.
b. What money will ring you depends on your personal beliefs and goals in life.
8)        a. During this process, job interview has arisen and appeared more and more important.
b. During this process, the job interview has arisen and appeared more and more important.
9)        a. First, the interviewer can tell something about the job to the interviewee such as the wage, the work conditions and some other things which is relevant to the job.
b. First, the interviewer can tell something about the job to the interviewee such as the wages, the working conditions and something else which is relevant to the job.
10)        a. They think that fresh water comes from such varieties of sources that it is always sufficient for use.
b. They think that fresh water comes from such a variety of sources that it is always sufficient for use.
11)        a. The primary cause is that we can expand our horizon.
b. The primary cause is that we can expand our horizons.
12)        a. In their opinion, people who change their job frequently are superficial and tactless.
b. In their opinion, people who change their jobs frequently are imprudent and tactless.
地板
wenming1221 发表于 08-8-26 09:15:36 | 只看该作者
还不错啊!
5#
战歌0802 发表于 08-8-26 11:44:32 | 只看该作者
谢谢~~
6#
sungokun 发表于 08-8-26 11:53:06 | 只看该作者
原来是这个电子版…………不过还是谢谢LZ啊
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