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免费考研论坛与考研1号联合发起“作文修改”活动——【第一期“”山寨文化】

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独孤悠 发表于 13-10-15 16:51:25 | 显示全部楼层
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As is vividly shown in the picture, someone are painting in a vase, who is thinking about money. There is “shanzhai” in the surface of vase. Behind him there are several similar vases.
  The picture revel that the copycat culture become popular nowadays. All aspects of life, We can find copycat culture. Not only the media, the books, but also our daily necessities have copycat’s shadow. First and foremost, as the society becomes more and more money-oriented, people treat money as life. Secondly, many person need brand but can’t afford it. Copycat is cheaper than brand, so customer buy it and businessman product it.
  Facing the pressure now, we should takes the best. In my personal, it’s not just the responsibility of the government, the public also needs to be responsible. The laws and regulation that enacted by government, are important safeguard. The public should improve their awareness that copycat is illegal. Not only does it hurt to society, but also hurt yourself. Moreover, businessman can work together to create a better product than the existing brand. If everyone all work together, it will not be a problem.

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独孤悠 发表于 13-10-16 18:49:40 | 显示全部楼层
考研1号编辑部 发表于 2013-10-16 14:47
写作原文    As is vividly shown in the picture, someone are(is)painting in(去掉)a  ...

一阵见血,谢谢老师
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独孤悠 发表于 13-10-19 20:20:51 | 显示全部楼层
govycm 发表于 2013-10-16 21:33
我写的竟然是最低的

现在分低总比考试分低好嘛

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