改写句子

70. Using a cleft sentence:（改成拟分裂）
Queen Elizabeth, the daughter of Henry Ⅷ, finally led England to greatness as a merchant power.
It is Queen Elizabeth, the daughter of Henry Ⅷ that she finally…..是这样改吗？

2. using whatever cohesive device is appropriate:(改成连接纽带)
shakespeeares's characters characters are really alive, so are some of jane austen's characters.--请问这个怎么改？

先看二楼，以及我上传的论文【有兴趣话可以看一下】，我觉得跟强调句有得一拼。

It is Queen Elizabeth, the daughter of Henry Ⅷ， that finally  led England to greatness as a merchant power。【分裂句】

What Queen Elizabeth, the daughter of Henry Ⅷ, finally did was to lead  England to greatness as a merchant power。[拟分裂句】

2.
shakespeeares's characters characters are really alive, so are some of jane austen's characters.--请问这个怎么改？

直接用both``` and````，或者either ```or ```，应该可以吧。

你是英语专业的吗？？

这么专业话的术语！！！