Where there is a will, there is a way

Where there is a will, there is a way
Do you always find it difficult to look for a good job? Do you face a huge challenge when you do your first job? Well, it may be one of the most common problems we college students are struggling with. Most of us are faced with new opportunities and challenges and are willing to find some good ways to solve these problems. Now, I have some ideas about these problems.
In the first place, we all know that many companies demand (1) the interviews have many reality experience. The knowledge that we have learned from the school is quite limited. In addition, things we have learned from books will soon be out of date. So we can take a part-time job to gain more invaluable experience if we have spare time. As a college student, I believe part-time jobs are very useful for us to improve ourselves. But we must learn how to strike a balance between work and study.
In the second place, we must catch every opportunity to train ourselves. Nowadays, (2) there are various of match to show ourselves in the society. These matches can promote our self-confidence and develop our sense of competition. From another perspective, these opportunities can widen our horizon. We can also acquire some knowledge and skills from them.
Last but not least, we should make a professional plan. It is undeniable that a suitable plan is indispensable to study and live. In the long run, the professional plan can lead us to achieve the target step by step.
In the final analysis, we still have a long way to go. So we should exchange ideas and emotions with our students and teachers, focus time and energy on learning various knowledge, and make full use of opportunities. (3) We will lay a foundation for find a good job if we do these.
As the proverb goes, “Where there is a will, there is a way.”
安徽中澳职业学院 拾以婷

【评语】本篇习作阐述了一句名言：“有志者，事竟成”，作者围绕该话题展开层层论述，告诉我们在机遇以及挑战与挫折面前应当怎么做。文章的总体结构把握得比较好, 层次清晰，语言流畅，句式运用上也比较准确, 但在看似简单的单词拼写方面存在多处错误，今后应注意。
【改进建议】(1) 应改为the interviewees have much social experience;
(2) 应改为there are varieties of matches;
(3) 应改为We will lay a solid foundation for finding a good job。

写过同名的作文，惭愧。I will try again

that\'s perfecter