How to Relieve the Stress
As college freshmen and the students who are English majors, perhaps passing the CET-4 is very important to us. If we can not pass it, maybe we will be laughed at by non-English majors. Furthermore, we are freshmen, so if we fail in this crucial exam, it is very likely that we will lose heart and sometimes even have a sense of fear for the later tests.
All mentioned above could make us have enormous pressure. Nevertheless, I want to say “Do not worry, boys and girls, believe in ourselves!” Maybe you can do as what the following tells you.
First, you must learn to vent your true feeling. For instance, you can cry hysterically at a quiet location; you can scream as loudly as you can on the school playground after class in the evening; you can shout your trouble out on the sea. Only by these ways can you feel relaxed, and then you will devote yourself to study and work.
Second, you should communicate with someone around you frequently, for example, your parents, close friends, and teachers. Not only will you feel warm, but they can give you some useful suggestions so that you could solve the problems and relieve your stress easily.
Third, you should take part in many kinds of sports activities. You can run, play basketball, volleyball or football and so on. By doing sports you will feel excited, what is more, it can help to improve your efficiency on study.
Fourth, relaxing yourself is also an essential part. You can listen to music in your leisure time, take a shower or bath and go swimming, which are all very helpful for you to relax yourself.
Fifth, you should keep an optimistic attitude towards grades, and do not care about it too much. You must understand that the test is only a kind of means. The mark in the test can not absolutely show the ability of a student. Please do remember that process is more important than the result. And also, whatever you do, you cannot always achieve success.
Boys and girls, please do as what I suggest above. I believe you must feel very good. Don’t you think so?
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【评语】这是一篇较长的实用性文章,作者从五个方面告诉了我们学习过程中如何减压。本文条理清晰、结构完整、论据充分,并能够灵活运用倒装句式,这一点比较好。但应注意,在今后的英语写作中,要多学习使用一些地道的英语,避免中式英语。此外,还应注意文章要精炼。 |