How time flies! It has been three years since I came to HeiLongjiang University. In the three years, many things have happened. I have also met a lot of friends here.
Generally speaking, three years is not too long for a man’s life. But the three years when I lived on campus has changed me a lot. For example, from the day when I was born to the day when I went to university, I had never left home alone for such a long time and never done housework by myself. How to take good care of myself and how to deal with the relationship with my roommates and classmates? These questions were all difficult for me to resolve at that time. After a period of time, nowadays I could get on very well with them and almost do everything independently. But I really know all these changes were not easy for me. Sometimes I felt lonely, angry and also homesick. It was the good friends I have met who helped me spend those boring days, and I find nothing to express my sincere thanks to them. One day once they are in need of help, I will undoubtedly do everything that I can to help them.
I'll have another one year in college, which I will extremely cherish with my friends.
It is sure that everything in college will be my great memory in my life for ever.
黑龙江大学应用技术学院05级计算机科学与技术系 焦英
【评语】本篇习作的作者主要概述了自己大学三年来的生活，从文中可以看出，作者在成长中逐渐变得成熟，对大学生活也有了更多的自信与满足，并且收获了人生中非常宝贵的财富——朋友的支持与鼓励。文章结构完整，描写到位，但在语言的基本功方面需要更好地修炼，句式、语言运用上需要仔细地斟酌推敲。 |
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