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wfn1982 发表于 09-1-10 17:49:37 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
as you can see in this cartoon ,almost everybody is indulged themselves in the oceation of internet and the graph seems like a web,everybody involved.it means,for the first time, modern technology and internet and transenced all the national boundaries and geographic distance ,you can contact with any body at any place or any time ,with the use of internet,people are getting closer and the world is getting smaller.
But ,on the other hand ,personally i think,the internet has also distant us in some aspects.For instance,a handwirted letter is repalced by a e-mail,a paper made christmas card is change to a electric one ,people no longer see each other very often and of course ,they had lost many time for cherishing their good times.What a pity,with the exist of internet ,we are becoming aloof to each other!
so ,to my understanding ,The web is somewhat like a double blade sword,with the convienince it had brought to us ,we should also keep in touch with each other in many other ways,Only in this way ,can we say that the web has really drawed us closer

不知道多少字,没时间查了,一气呵成,用了十分钟。
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tmmu13 发表于 09-1-10 17:52:22 | 只看该作者
这次大家考完下来都觉得作文写的不错,我觉得要是作文拿不到23分估计英语就就会给拖后腿
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wsczwujie 发表于 09-1-10 19:09:43 | 只看该作者
你只写了 近,没有写远,   分是有 高分难
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 楼主| wfn1982 发表于 09-1-10 19:17:28 | 只看该作者
第二段不是远吗?
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