请教一个句子

hangon2009 · 发表于 09-1-2 14:26:05

原句：The island a amazing place which attracts a great many people who possess much money.
请问可以这样改吗：The island is a amazing place which attracts a great many people possessing much money.

谢谢大家，急啊

[ 本帖最后由 hangon2009 于 2009-1-2 18:45 编辑 ]

hangon2009 · 发表于 09-1-2 15:34:21

没人帮帮我吗，呜呜

hangon2009 · 发表于 09-1-2 18:43:30

没人帮帮我吗，呜呜

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