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Dear Sir/Madam,
          This is to recommend WangFang who is one of my excellent students.She is interest in the position of secretary
in your company and asked me to write this letter.
         Before graduated from our university ,she has had obtained the undergraduate and passed the CET-6.She has a good command of English.Besides having a brilliant academic record ,she is a very enjoynable sort of man to associate with.In addition,her spare time often be spent on taking part in some part-time jobs,such as secretary.The good education background and work experience can idicate that she can meet your company's basic requirements.
       I believe that she will be a outstanding candidate for your company.
       Best wishes.
                            Yours sincerely,
                              LiMing

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写的不错呀！！！！

为什么这么多人预测推荐信啊？

原帖由 doudou_ 于 2008-12-17 08:17 发表
为什么这么多人预测推荐信啊？

我写得玩的不是预测

She is interested in the position of secretary