张剑 曾鸣《考研英语最后冲刺8套题》答疑专贴（已经开始作文修改了）

原帖由 找着找着 于 2009-1-2 18:57 发表
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a student in Beijing university. I am now writing this letter to ask for some information about continuing my graduate study at your school.
I major in bridge de ...

Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a student in Beijing University. I am now writing this letter to ask for some information about continuing my graduate study at your school.
I major in bridge design,(需另起一句) in addition to required courses of my major, I take an active part in school life. I shall be obliged if you kindly tell me what is need (needed) to offer to apply for your university. And I want to know how many overseas students in your school. My complete resume is attached.
Thanks for your kind consideration and I look forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely
Li Ming

评析：
本文符合题目的写作要求，较有条理性，句子结构大都符合语法规范。
评分：8分


So vivid and thought-provoking is this extraordinary picture that we are tempted to take another close look and we find a boy’s hand in a computer screen. He need (needs) someone who can help him to (keep) far away (from) Net surf (surfing). It can easily be seen (be easily seen) that it is dangerous and harmful (to) get into habit to Net (of surfing online).

There are many reasons to explain that (改为why) drown in the web sea is harmful and the followings are the typical ones. The first reason is that if a man takes a lot of time in (on) Internet, he have (has) no energy to do other things. It will result in he can’t pass exams (result in sth,故改为his failure in the exams). The second reason is that because some people get into the habit to Net (of surfing online), he can’t tell which is true between real word (world) and Net word (world).

According (Accordingly,) (it) is imperative for us to take concerned measures. First and foremost it is essential that the rules should be worked out to limit the young people to enter (limit sb to sth,故改为entering) the public Net-bar. In addition, we should improve the awareness of people that it is important to have a good Net environment. The last but not the least the media should play a positive role in helping people have other recreation.

评析：
本文对图画的寓意理解是正确的，文章的段落结构比较清晰，但是需要注意的问题是词语搭配和一些语法错误。望继续努力！
评分：10分

C

谢谢楼住的分享，非常感谢，

感谢分享，谢谢楼主！！

非常感谢你们了,相信有你们的帮助我们会有收获的!

非常感谢～谢谢楼主～

As is vividly depicted in the above cartoon, a well suited gentleman, sitting before a desk, is doing his accomplishment, through tearing, coping and pasting material from others, and thinking, without feeling ashamed that what is yours is mine as well.
The messages which the cartoon conveys are rather clear. Obviously, the writer is there to call for academic honesty. There are a handful of, so called, schoolar in our society who simply do his research without any investation and just steal his counterpart\'s accomplishment like what the above cartoon indicates. It is needless to say that this kind of schoolars has lost their academic honesty.
In the building of creative nation, science and technology innovation is undoubtedly the most important aspect. And it should be the academic honesty, I think, that owns the most important place in the innovation of science and technology. Only be honest in research, can we obtain concrete advance. And without it, we would finally get nothing. So, in one word, let us be honest  in doing research

As is vividly depicted in the above cartoon, a well suited gentleman, sitting before a desk, is doing his accomplishment, through tearing, coping and pasting material from others, and thinking, without feeling ashamed that what is yours is mine as well.
     The messages which the cartoon conveys are rather clear. Obviously, the writer is there to call for academic honesty. There are a handful of, so called, schoolar in our society who simply do his research without any investation and just steal his counterpart\'s accomplishment like what the above cartoon indicates. It is needless to say that this kind of schoolars has lost their academic honesty.
     In the building of creative nation, science and technology innovation is undoubtedly the most important aspect. And it should be the academic honesty, I think, that owns the most important place in the innovation of science and technology. Only be honest in research, can we obtain concrete advance. And without it, we would finally get nothing. So, in one word, let us be honest  in doing research.

原帖由 liyangqin 于 2009-1-5 17:56 发表
As is vividly depicted in the above cartoon, a well suited gentleman, sitting before a desk, is doing his accomplishment, through tearing, coping and pasting material from others, and thinking, w ...

As is vividly depicted in the above cartoon, a well suited gentleman, sitting before a desk, is doing his accomplishment, through tearing, coping and pasting material from others, and thinking, without feeling ashamed that what is yours is mine as well.

The messages which the cartoon conveys are rather clear. Obviously, the writer is there to call for academic honesty. There are a handful of, so called, schoolar (拼写错误+复数形式scholars) in our society who simply do his research without any investation (拼写错误investigation) and just steal his counterpart\'s accomplishment like what the above cartoon indicates. It is needless to say that this kind of schoolars (拼写错误scholars) has (have) lost their academic honesty.

In the building of creative nation, science and technology innovation is undoubtedly the most important aspect. And it should be the academic honesty, I think, that owns the most important place in the innovation of science and technology. Only be honest in research, can we obtain concrete advance. And without it, we would finally get nothing. So, in one word, let us be honest in doing research.

评析：
本文正确把握了图画的寓意，文章内容切合题意，并且涵盖了题目中的信息要点。
文章思路清晰，清楚地表达了其内涵。主题思想鲜明，论述的层次清晰严谨。
句子大都符合语法规范，句式上具有多样性。
评分：15分


C

感谢分享!!!!

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