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[G]By using the first draft as a means of thinking about what you want to say, you will very likely discover more than your notes originally suggested. Plenty of good writers don’t use outlines at all but discover ordering principles as they write. Do not attempt to compose a perfectly correct draft the first time around.

通过使用初稿作为一种手段

不要试图一次就能写出完美的稿子。

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41题，是不是比较简单啊，前面说你站着写躺着写坐着写，是不是和D的你怎末写都行挂上钩了？

第一段紧挨41空的句子：
The first draft will appear on the page
only if you stop avoiding the inevitable and sit, stand up, or lie down to write.
D选项：
It makes no difference how you write, just so you do. Now that you have developed a topic into a tentative thesis, you can assemble your notes and begin to flesh out whatever outline you have made.
第二段开头的句子：
Be flexible.

42题，前面说的是写出草稿，这里可以挂上钩的，好像有B和G两个，我们来看一下后面是否挂上钩了。后面说的是语法等毛病是可以等会儿在修改的。B的最后一句和这句衔接上了吗？“Concluding paragraphs demand equal attention”结尾段需要平等的关注，显然和语法这个没什么关系，都扯到结尾段上了。看G，别想着你的稿子能第一次写就完美，是不是比B更合适？你别想着一次就能写出好东西，语法等小错误是可以留着以后在修改的。
答案是G

Be flexible. Your outline should smoothly conduct you from one point to the next, but do not permit it to railroad you. If a relevant and important idea occurs to you now, work it into the draft.


By using the first draft as a means of thinking about what you want to say, you will very likely discover more than your notes originally suggested. Plenty of good writers don’t use outlines at all but discover ordering principles as they write. Do not attempt to compose a perfectly correct draft the first time around.


Grammar, punctuation, and spelling can wait until you revise.

43题，发现43题其实和后一句关系比较大。因为前一句是上一段的了。
看看43题后面说的是“ will be easier to keep track ”，你的文章更容易留下痕迹，也就是你知道你都对你的文章做了哪些改动啊之类的。
那么在选项中哪一个和留下修改文章的痕迹有关呢？
是不是只有A？A说To make revising easier要在书的边页或者行间留距离，这样你可以进行改动。

Good writing most often occurs when you are in hot pursuit of an idea rather than in a nervous search for errors.


To make revising easier, leave wide margins and extra space between lines so that you can easily add words, sentences, and corrections. Write on only one side of the paper.


Your pages will be easier to keep track of that way, and, if you have to clip a paragraph to place it elsewhere, you will not lose any writing on the other side.

44空前一句说的是有软件可以检查拼写，后一句说的是打印出来更容易看。
好，看看那个选项和软件，或者检查拼写或者和打印有关。
B和C，好像有点关系。
看B具体说的是什么？修改文章，注意引言和结尾。这里好像有一点不同，我们的原文离说的是拼写。
看C，数据存在盘里或者打印出来……
是不是和44空的后面的打印出来的更容易看，相呼应了？
答案就是C

[B        After you have clearly and adequately developed the body of your paper, pay particular attention to the introductory and concluding paragraphs. It’s probably best to write the introduction last, after you know precisely what you are introducing. Concluding paragraphs demand equal attention because they leave the reader with a final impression.

Some software programs can also check spelling and certain grammatical elements in your writing.

It’s worth remembering, however, that though a clean copy fresh off a printer may look terrific, it will read only as well as the thinking and writing that have gone into it. Many writers prudently 。store their data on disks and print their pages each time they finish a draft to avoid losing any material because of power failures or other problems.

These printouts are also easier to read than the screen when you work on revisions.

45题
前一句说的是和学生删除某一段有关，那么我们就找和这个事情有关的选项来对比。
有E和F，虽然这件事很有趣（E），在最后一段（F）
从这里我们可以看出，E是已经通过上一个事例开始讲作者引用事例的目的了
而F还在说这个事例。
看看45题的后面说“Remember that your initial draft is only that.”初稿只是这样而已，这说明上一段是已经讲了一个道理了，这一句是总结。
那45题就不可能是继续讲故事了，应该是对故事展开讨论了。
所以45题应该选E

[E]        Although this is an interesting issue, it has nothing to do with the thesis, which explains how the setting influences Sammy’s decision to quit his job. Instead of including that paragraph, she added one that described Lengel’s crabbed response to the girls so that she could lead up to the A & P “policy” he enforces.

[F]        In the final paragraph about the significance of the setting in “A & P,” the student brings together the reasons Sammy quit his job by referring to his refusal to accept Lengel’s store policies.

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The student who wrote “The A & P as a State of Mind” wisely dropped a paragraph that questioned whether Sammy displays chauvinistic attitudes toward women.

Although this is an interesting issue, it has nothing to do with the thesis, which explains how the setting influences Sammy’s decision to quit his job. Instead of including that paragraph, she added one that described Lengel’s crabbed response to the girls so that she could lead up to the A & P “policy” he enforces.


Remember that your initial draft is only that.

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谢谢豚豚JJ（好肉麻）看文字还是太多了，眼睛疼，强烈要求视频真人讲座！！！！！！！！

恩 不错 不过我没看懂