楼上的我改了一下，谨供参考
when asked abou the internet trading ,most people say the internet trading is very convenient ,but many other people regard this business as insecurity ,I personally think that the internet trading is a thing coming with the internet.(a method we can take much advantage of)
我也写了一个
when asked about the ongoing economic crisis many people say it is the uncontinuable development of real estate results in the crisis but many other people regard the lifeway of American as the cause ,I personally think it is the capitism itself is the ultimate reason
