一、写作课的学习方法：
八字方针：背诵---精彩词汇；精彩句型；文章精彩句子；万能框架；经典范文
默写----用红笔更正对照原因
互译
描红
三个阶段：牢记；效仿；持之以恒
二、考生写作困境及对策
1、滔滔不绝意识流：英语作文最多分三段，最多四段
中文情感分段：读者领会
英语逻辑分段：作者交待
"猴子原则"-----提纲原则
量化：200个字 12-15句话
2、无话可说真难受
3、真情流露没必要（只需要"相关"）
考作文是制造一个机会展示书面表达英语的能力，应该把构思的时间降低到最低限度。
4、英语表达憋得慌
达到12分：安全第一：句子结构、语法
简单原则：词汇
达到17分：词汇多变：多使用同义词、近义词
句子结构多变：一定要有复杂句子结构
树干：谓语部分，核心部分
刺眼错误：a、主谓一致性问题b、动词时态c、定冠词和不定冠词d、名词单复数 e、介词、副词搭配f、拼写错误
树枝
绿叶
（从以上三个层次用心体会范文每一个句子）
5、处于被动危害大
三、十大段落：
1、现状
2、解释性段落（必练习，参看97看四六级考题）
3、描述性段落（图表和图画）
（1-3开头段落）
4、原因列举（主体段落）
5、举例（2001年考题，参看97看四六级考题）
6、意图分析
7、利弊（自己总结）
8、结尾（自己总结）
（6-8中间段落）
9、建议措施
10、预测未来（目前没考过）
四、经典预测20篇！
92年是第一个经典篇！
99年是第二个经典篇！
2000年是第三个经典篇！
2001年是第四个经典篇！（场景+提纲+图画）
问：如何使作文的时态简单化，以最大程度地避免错误？
参加国际上的任何一场考试，只要是写英语作文，主体上应该是一般现在时态；
只有当你提到具体的、过去的、某一事件段发生的具体的某一件事情作为例证时，可以一般过去时。
中心时态是简单的一般现在时。
图画作文
以下四篇背诵文章解决该类题型：
第一：对图画进行描述：
第二：透过画面点出图画的寓意；
第三：发表议论、提出问题方法和建议。
P102 Exercise 7
（背诵1）As is shown in the pictures, (/From the pictures, we can see clear that) with the increase of commercial fishing, the number of fishes dramatically decreased. In one picture, there were various kinds of fish and only one fishing-boat in 1900. On the contrary, in 1995 there was only one fish, with many fishing-boats.
The purpose of this picture is to show us that due attention has to be paid to the decline of ocean resources. Owing to overfishing the number of fishes has obviously dropped. If we let this situation go(/continue) as it is, we do not know where fish will be in the future. By that time, our environment will suffer a great destruction.
Therefore, it is imperative for us to take drastic measures. For one thing, we should appeal to our authorities to make strict laws to control commercial fishing. For another, we should enhance the awareness of people that the ocean resources are very vital to us. Only in this way can we protect our ocean resources. Also I believe that we humans can overcome this difficulty, and we will have a brighter future.
P25 范文十(重点)
Directions:沙进我退，我进沙退
A. Study the following cartoon carefully and write an essay in about 200 words.
B. Your essay must be written clearly on ANSWER SHEET Ⅱ.
C. Your essay should meet the requirements below:
1. Describe the cartoon（对图画进行描述） and the message conveyed（透过画面点出图画的寓意）
2. Draw a conclusion and give your comment on the cartoon.（发表议论、提出问题方法和建议）
（背诵2）From the pictures, we can see clearly the relationship between people and the deserts. In the first picture, people are fleeing from greedy sand hills because they cut down all the trees. The caption reads(/words read): As the sand advances, we retreat. In the second picture, the people have returned carrying tools, water and young trees to plant the land again. The caption reads: As we advance, the sand retreats.
It seems to me that the cartoonist is sending a message about the importance of trees in water and soil conservation, and the need for everyone to fight against the danger of desertification. In fact, what he is saying is if we do not fight against the sandhills, the
sandhiills will drive us away from the land. (/In fact, what he is saying is that the sandhills will drive us away from the land if we do not fight against them.) If we let this situation go as it is, our environment will suffer a great destruction.
The best way to fight back against the greedy desert is made clear in the second picture.(若图画给出解决方案，需要在写作中体现出来） There the local people are actively setting about the task of planting trees to reclaim(改造) the land and make it(代词的使用) fertile. The fact that（同位语）there are three people in the picture each with a different job(逻辑独立主谓结构，介词短语表示动态概念), suggest that(事实说明)working together is the key to success in the battle against soil erosion.(措施、建议)
评注二：Today, the earth's deserts are spreading and getting larger and desertification is a serious problem facing the world. The major reason for this is irresponsible cutting down of trees. As is shown in the first cartoon, when people cut down trees desert forces on and becomes irrepressible.
People cut down trees for various reasons but they may forget that trees play a vital part in water and soil conservation. Trees can preserve moisture and fertility in the soil, protect soil against erosion and prevent fertile land from becoming desert. Therefore when people cut down all of the trees, the earth lies bare and dry in the hot sun, and desert is inevitable.
Desertification can lead to many other serious problems which may threaten the existence of human beings, such as a reduction of arable land, terrible droughts and famine. In order to prevent desertification, people have to plant trees, as the second cartoon shows. The time when people plant trees is the time when desert retreats. People should not cut down trees any more, as is done in the first cartoon, but rather, they should plant more trees, and only in this way can desertification be finally defeated.
P28 范文八
隐形杀手
Directions:
A. Study the following cartoon carefully and write an essay in about 200 words.
B. Your essay must be written clearly on ANSWER SHEET Ⅱ.
C. Your essay should meet the requirements below:
1. Describe the cartoon and the message conveyed
2. Draw a conclusion and give your comment on the cartoon |
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