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我今天写了一句话 不过 怎么看 怎么别扭  希望牛人 给我改下 谢谢  
    as is shown in the picture, the flower in the first picture is beautiful with the protection its get from the greenhouse, while raining and lighting outside.

我觉得its get那里有问题,如果要表达的话,应该是it gets才对.
还有,觉得读起来有点罗嗦.........
the flower in the first picture is beautiful under the protection of the greenhouse.
我试着改了一下.....不对之处,还请指正.
这应该是真题的文章吧.
As is shown in the picture, the flower in the first picture grows well in the greenhouse while raining and lighting outside. In contrary, while it is exposed outside....

感觉两个picture离这么近有些不爽……