写了个小论文，请大家帮忙看看英文摘要

不知道我的英文摘要里是不是有错误？请大家帮忙看看，谢谢！

How to Pass the Pretest of Postgraduate EntranceExamination? Using the Postgraduate Psychology Entrance Examination for Example

Abstract  Nowadays, the Postgraduate Entrance Examination (PEE) is becoming popular more and more and has become a hot social issue. There are two stages in the PEE: pretest and retest. Mostcandidates are eliminated in the pretest. Thus, how to get a favorable score inthe pretest is worth studying. This article used the Postgraduate Psychology Entrance Examination (PPEE) for example to study the issue. 53 essays which talked about preparing for the PPEE are selected from a PEE forum. At first, the literature analysis method of phenomenology was employed, and thus 29 key words from the essays were extracted. These key words involved keeping positive mental attitude, persistence, study plan, paying attention to authentic examination items, and so on. Then, exploratory factor analysis was employed, and 7 key factorsin preparing for the PPEE were obtained: learning ability, self management, methods and techniques, with the help of others, time management, tailoring self to choose university, and attitude management. Each key factor was explained in the article. According to the results, if a candidate could improve his/her learning ability, self management ability, time management ability and mental attitude management ability, master appropriate methods and techniques, tailor himself/herself to choose university, and make good use of the power of others rather than fight a lone battle behind closed doors, he/she would get a favorable score in the pretest. Whether to take part in a remedial class or not, and what his/her own major is, both the two were not important. This research was the first time to explore the key factors in preparing for the PEE by statistic method. The conclusions could be guides for the candidates of the PPEE and other majors.

Keywords  Postgraduate Entrance Examination, pretest, psychology, preparing for test

笔版可以找第一母语是英语的帮你改啊，华南这样的学生应该多啊！

大葵 发表于 2013-7-17 15:47
我弱弱地说一句 英文摘要好像不这么写。。。这是摘要么

那该怎么写？请大葵胸指教~

我弱弱地说一句 英文摘要好像不这么写。。。这是摘要么

Pretest 用来描述初试是不恰当的。
这个词有动词和名词两种用法。其中动词是：to test (something) before presenting it to its intended public or client .
也就是说这个词相当于是“内测”，或者“预备测验”的意思。从重要性上来说，这个词内在含义是说这个测试是relatively not so important
但是，对于考研的初试和复试，两者都是正式（formal）测验的一部分。从重要性来说，起码是和复试平等的。
我认为初试应该翻译“written part of Postgraduate Entrance Examination”或者“ First part of PEE”

弱弱的问一句，这样的论文有什么学术价值么？

聪明巫 发表于 2013-7-17 00:50
如果用四个字形容这篇摘要。。那真是。。不忍直视啊。。。

说这些没太大用啊。关键是怎么改

如果用四个字形容这篇摘要。。那真是。。不忍直视啊。。。

笔为剑 发表于 2013-7-16 22:09
你说的这个，大家都明白。关键是，具体该怎么改。

你如果有相关领域的英文文献，平时留意总结下他们的introduction部分的相关的句子套着改下 应该会好很多 这样这个应该不是很麻烦的

LAEXELIN 发表于 2013-7-16 22:06
看了几句 表述基本上是中文思维

你说的这个，大家都明白。关键是，具体该怎么改。