（转）【研英作文】写作高分佳句 Step By Step（第十三期）

第一期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-322828-1-1.html
第二期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-323211-1-1.html
第三期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-323609-1-1.html
第四期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-324155-1-1.html
第五期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-324663-1-1.html
第六期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-324886-1-1.html
第七期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-325420-1-1.html
第八期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-325772-1-1.html
第九期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-326154-1-1.html
第十期的链接地址： http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-326660-1-1.html
第十一期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-327038-1-1.html
第十二期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-327411-1-1.html
第十三期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-327599-1-1.html
前十三期小结，见附件：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-327616-1-1.html
14期：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-327934-1-1.html

1.从四楼开始对前一楼的习作进行批改，建议大家使用“引用”格式，并将前一楼的错误用“颜色”标出
2.英译中
Perhaps it is time to reexamine the idea that college degrees are a guarantee of intelligence .

答案刷黑可见，先自己翻译再看，革命靠自觉

（也许现在是应该重新考虑以大学学位为智力的保证这种想法的时候了。 ）
3.学习以下句型，要铭记于心啊！
Perhaps it is time to reexamine the idea that ...
4.使用3给出的句型，写一段句子，题材不限
5.复习前一期：
中译英：
历史上，人口过剩的问题从来没有比现在更加突出。
答案刷黑可见，先自己翻译再看，革命靠自觉
(Never before in history has the issue of overpopulation been more evident than now .)
6.把给出要求仿写的句子背诵下啦，下一期会要求大家中译英哦～



笔记:这一句型中有2个闪光词汇,分别是
1. Perhaps,用在句首,表示自己的观点,使语气不那么绝对.

2.大家知道重新检查,重新审视该怎么说了吧!对,就是reexamine.它还有复试的意思.
希望大家能多记忆一下这种精彩词汇,把简单词汇升级喔.

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http://224.cachefile14.rayfile.com/c466/zh-cn/preview/0aa879526db537a46fdc06155d42a3fb/preview.mp3
今天推荐的歌，是owl city的the saltwater room，一首很不错的英伦曲风的歌，听得很舒服。owl city在写这首歌的时候才大二哦~~一男一女的组合，声音很好听。
附上歌词，权当英语学习！

I opened my eyes last night and saw you in the low light
Walking down by the bay, on the shore, staring up at the planes that aren’t there anymore
I was feeling the night grow old and you were looking so cold
Like an introvert, I drew my over shirt
Around my arms and began to shiver violently before
You happened to look and see the tunnels all around me
Running into the dark underground
All the subways around create a great sound
To my motion fatigue: farewell
With your ear to a seashell
You can hear the waves in underwater caves
As if you actually were inside a saltwater room

Time together is just never quite enough
When you and I are alone, I’ve never felt so at home
What will it take to make or break this hint of love
We need time, only time
When we’re apart whatever are you thinking of?
If this is what I call home, why does it feel so alone?
So tell me darling, do you wish we’d fall in love?
All the time, All the time...

Can you believe that the crew has gone and wouldn’t let me sign on?
All my islands have sunk in the deep, so I can hardly relax or even oversleep
I feel as if I were home some nights when we count all the ship lights
I guess I’ll never know why sparrows love the snow
We’ll turn off all of the lights and set this ballroom aglow

[ 本帖最后由 tangshufang 于 2008-10-21 13:55 编辑 ]

顶上。。。。

2，英译中
也许现在是时候重新考虑用大学学位作为智力保证这种想法了。

3，学习
Perhaps it is time to reexamine the idea that .....

4，造句
Perhaps it is time to reexamine the idea that we should accelerate the speed of ecnomic development  the fast the better.

5，复习
Never before in history has the issue of  overpopulation been more evedent than now.

楼主辛苦啦，谢谢！

1.也许是时候重新考虑把大学学位作为智力的保证的时候了。
2.Perhaps it is time to reexamine the idea that human is the dominate of nature.
3.Never before in  history has the issue of overpopilation  been more evident than now.

值得褒奖呀！

楼上的reational是什么意思啊，查不到啊
是想写rational吗？还是别的什么

还有26楼的怎么把我上期的造句写这边了。
晕死了

Perhaps it is time to reexamine the idea that the love is reational

曲风很——————舒服

Never before in history has the issue of environmental  protection  been more evident than now.