（转）【研英作文】写作高分佳句 Step By Step（第四期）

[answerfly]认真做作业，对自己负责[/answerfly]（转）【研英作文】写作高分佳句 Step By Step（第四期）

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[s:5] 事先声明：这次英语写作训练班共39期，一天一期！！！目的是对大家的写作水平提高有所帮助！！不管反响如何，我将一如既往地进行~~每天都要有收货！！！以下内容不是我原创，但觉得十分有用，就转帖在这里。每天一期！！


1.从三楼开始对前一楼的习作进行批改，建议大家使用“引用”格式，并将前一楼的错误用“颜色”标出
2.英译中
It is widely acknowledged that extensive deforestation contributed to heavy summer flooding . Experts argue that China must introduce a massive afforestation program . But I doubt whether afforestation alone will solve the problem .答案刷黑可见，先自己翻译再看，革命靠自觉
人们普遍认为过度砍伐造成了夏季特大洪水。专家认为中国必须推行大规模的植树造林计划。但我对仅仅植树造林就能解决问题表示怀疑。
3.学习以下句型，要铭记于心啊！
It is widely acknowledged that ...contributed to...
Experts argue that ...
But I doubt whether...alone will solve the problem .
4.使用3给出的句型，写一段关于“汽车尾气排放－环境污染”的句子
5.复习前一期：
中译英：

目前，针对流动工人的问题展开了普遍的争论。反对流动工人增加的人认为这会导致犯罪率升高，从而危害社会稳定。他们主张应该严格限制进入中国城市的流动工人。但是，另一方面，支持廉价劳动力流入的人主张，为了支持大规模的城市基础设施建设规划，流动人口是必需的。
答案刷黑可见，先自己翻译再看，革命靠自觉
There is a general debate nowadays about the problem of itinerant workers . Those who object to the rising migrant population argue that increasing numbers lead to rising crime rates and harm social stability . They believe that strict limits should be placed on migrants entering China ' s cities . But people who favor the influx of the cheap labor force , on the other hand , maintain that migrants are needed to support the massive urban infrastructure construction program .
6.把给出要求仿写的句子背诵下啦，下一期会要求大家默
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[ 本帖最后由 tangshufang 于 2008-10-17 19:53 编辑 ]

哈哈 打错了比较多的字~

汽车尾气排放－环境污染
It is widely acknowledged that the increasing emision of vehicles contribututed to enviomental pollution.Experts argue that strict limits placed on the number of vehicles .But i doubt where stict alone will get the desired eresult。

很多很多，看起来不错

It is widely acknowledged that cars emission contributed to nature comtemplation.Experts argue that China must limit strict emission regulations. But I doubt whether law alone will solve the problem.

It is widely acknowledged that the discharge of vehicles\' emission  contributed to the environmental pollution.Experts argue that strict limit should be place on the emission.But I doubt whether the action alone will put into effect indeedly.

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It is widely acknowledged that car\'s emission contributed to heavy eviroment pollution,Experts argue that  china must control  the  number of moters.but I doubt whether  the controlation alone will solve the problem
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It is widely acknowledge that the emission by cars contribute to air pollution.Excepts argue that place a heavy tax on the purchase of cars.But I doubt  that only this measure alone will slove the problem.

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