【研英作文】写作高分佳句 Step By Step（第21期）

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1.从四楼开始对前一楼的习作进行批改，建议大家使用“引用”格式，并将前一楼的错误用“颜色”标出
2.英译中
There has been undesirable trend in recent years towards the worship of money . A recent survey showed that X percent of respondents ranked getting rich as their top priority , compared to X percent only a few years ago . Why do people fail to realize that wealth does not necessarily bring happiness ?



答案刷黑可见，先自己翻译再看，革命靠自觉
(近年来出现了对社会有害的拜金主义倾向。最近的一项调查表明，X%的调查对象把致富作为他们的首选，相比之下，就在几年前，只有X%的人这样想。为什么人们没能意识到财富不一定带来幸福呢？)
3.学习以下句型，要铭记于心啊！
There has been ... trend in recent years towards ... A recent survey showed that X percent of respondents ranked ... as their top priority , compared to X percent only a few years ago . Why do people fail to realize that ...

.4.使用3给出的句型，写一段句子，题材不限
5.复习前一期：
中译英：
传统的思维方式有了显著的变化。舆论发生了剧变，人们表现出更开放的思想以及决定他们自己命运的强烈愿望。
答案刷黑可见，先自己翻译再看，革命靠自觉
(Traditional way of thinking have changed dramatically . The pendulum has swung and people are exhibiting greater open-mindedness and a burning desire to detemine their own destiny .)
6.把给出要求仿写的句子背诵下啦，下一期会要求大家中译英哦～

笔记:　又一个前后变化比较的例子．．．ＭＳ适合图表作文的说～～[answerfly]1[/answerfly]


果果推荐了一首歌，jordin Sparks的《no air》。
Jordin Sparks　年龄: 17岁 黑人女高中生。是“美国偶像”冠军得主，“美国偶像”是中国超女等选秀节目的鼻主

http://100fm.co.il/player/mp3/JordinSparksNoair.mp3

tell me how i'm supposed to breathe with no air?
快告诉我没有空气我该如何呼吸

if i should die before i wake
如果我在醒来之前就已没有呼吸
because you took my breath away
这是因为你带走了我的呼吸
losing you is like living in a world with no air, oh
失去你就像生活在一个没有空气的世界里

i'm here alone, didn't wanna leave
我在这里无依无靠 不愿随意走动
my heart won't move, it's incomplete
我的心不会再被你感动 已经残缺不齐
is there an other way i can make you understand?
是否能以什么方式让你明白我的感受

but how
但是 怎么
do you expect me, to live alone with just me?
你怎么能指望我独自一人生活
'cause my world revolves around you
我的世界全部都依赖着你而存在
it's so hard for me to breathe
这对于我来说仿佛窒息

tell me how i'm supposed to breathe with no air?
请你告诉我 我该如何在没有空气里的世界中呼吸
can't live, can't breath with no air
在没有空气的世界里 不能生存 不能呼吸
that's how i feel whenever ain't there
这就是无时不刻想你的感觉
there's no air, no air
这里已经耗尽所有空气

got me out here in the water so deep
把我从这个深渊中拉出来吧
tell me how you gon' be here without me?
告诉我你没有我是怎样感觉
if you ain't here i just can't breathe
如果你不在这里 我就无法呼吸
there's no air, no air
这里已经耗尽空气
no air air, no air air
没有了 全部都没有了

i walked, i ran, i jumped,
我徒步 我奔跑 我跳跃
i took right off the ground to float to you
我从地面升起 漂移到你的视线里
there's no gravity to hold me down, for real
真的 已经没有任何引力可以让我着陆
but somehow i'm still alive inside
但是不管怎样 我内心任然苏醒
you took my breath but i survived
你断送我的空气 但是我却幸存了下来
i don't know how but i don't even care
我也不知道为什么 但我已不在意了



[ 本帖最后由 tangshufang 于 2008-10-29 14:01 编辑 ]

近年来出现拜金主义的不良现象。一项调查表明X%的调查对象把致富当做自己的最高选择，相比之下，几年前只有X%是这样的。为什么人们没有认识到财富是不能带来幸福的必要前提呢？ 有些痛苦的翻译完了。。

There has been amazing trend in recent years towards showing the young kids off. A recent survey showed that X percent of respondents ranked acting themselves on stage to be wll-known as their top priority , compared to X percent only a few years ago . Why do people fail to realize that it is  harmful to make children be mature rapidly earlier .
好累好辛苦

今天的句型，考试时很有用

值得学习下

1.近年来出现拜金主义的不良倾向。最近的一项调查显示，X% 的调查对象把致富作为他们的首要目标，而就在几年前，只有X% 的人这么想。为什么人们没有认识到财富并不一定会给他们带来快乐呢？
2.There has been undesirable trend in recent years towards  idol worship in teenagers. A recent survey showed that X percent of respondents ranked pursuing pop stars  as their top priority,compared to X percent only a few years ago.Why do people fail to realize that blind hero worship will be a waste of time and energy?
3.Traditional way of thinking have dramatically changed.The pendulum has swung and people  are exhibiting greater  open-mindness and a burning desire to detemine their  own destiny

支持``````` 楼主辛苦了

2、英译中
近年来，拜金主义的发展趋势令人堪忧。最近的一项调查显示，相比于前几年X%的比率，X%的回应者把致富作为他们的头号追求。为什么人们就不能意识到财富并不必然带来幸福呢？
把priority译成追求，不知引申得对不对。
4、造句
用05年的养老足球赛
There has been unfavourable trend in recent years towards abuse of elders. A recent survey showed that Y percent pf respondents ranked taking care of old parents as their pressing burdan, compared to X percent only a few years ago. Why do people fail to realize that it is their responsibility to afford wellbeing to their parents?
5、复习
Traditional way of thinking has changed. The pendulumn has swung and people are expressing more open mindness and the strong desire to determine their destiny.

[ 本帖最后由 tangshufang 于 2008-10-28 19:08 编辑 ]

郁闷，做完发帖时竟然网速慢得发不上去。又要重做郁闷。
2、近年来出现了拜金主义的不良趋向。最近的一项调查显示，X% 的调查对象把致富作为他们的优先考虑对象，而就在几年前，只有X% 的人这么想。为什么人们没有意识到财富不一定能给人们带来快乐呢？
There has been undesirable trend in recent years towards infatuation of playing electronic games  in teenagers. A recent survey showed that X percent of respondents ranked playing games as their top priority,compared to X percent only a few years ago.Why do people fail to realize that infatuation of playing electronic games  are harmful to health of teenagers.
4、Traditional the way of thinking have dramatically changed.The pendulum has swung and people are exhibiting greater
open-mindedness and a burning desire to detemine their own destiny.

今天的句型，考试时很有用

55555怎么没有人听音乐捏？

我觉得蛮好听的，我喜欢这种节奏感很强的音乐！~咯咯