例文 The importance of learning basic skills
（开头描述图片）What we can see from the cartoon is that the teacher is instructing the students some basic mathematic skills. However, some students are wondering that if it will be outdated in the future. The picture implicitly raises the question of the importance of the fundamental skills us students learn in our classes.
（中间，此处省略N字，例文给的不好，太啰嗦了）
（总结：再次强调）To sum up, we should think highly of the importance of basic and fundamental skills that guarantee our wonderful and brilliant future. Furthermore, we should make full use of those elementary skills, consciously applying them in our works and life. Basic skill will never be outdated.
解析：我是如何写的呢？
第一：简短有力
第二：阐释明了
第三：关联词
第四：句型
第五：强调主题
(我来写)The importance of learning basic skills
第1段
（开头）What we can see from the cartoon is that the teacher is instructing the students some basic mathematic skills.However, some students are wondering that if it will be outdated in the future.（对图片描述）The picture implicitly raises the question of the importance of the fundamental skills us students learn in our classes.（引出话题：是否学习基础技能重要？）50词
第2段
（阐述现象）With the development of our society,more and more people are think that learning basic skills is useless compared with primary skills such as computer skills .（对比，与现象相反）As we all know,it’s an obvious truth that we could not build a magnificent mansion without solid foundations.Thus,what should we do to increase people's awareness of learning basic skills?(衔接下文）(58词）
第3段
（关联词）To begin with ,we should cultivate the habit of learning basic skills during our daily life.Moreover,more chances and cares should be given when children at home in learning basic skills.Last but not least,schools should set relative curriculum s to build up our basic skills. (47词）
第4段
（句型结尾）Only in this way can we learn the basic skills well and won't be outdated when we are in the job market (and have a better life in the future) (22词)
第四步：再次强调主题（最好的就是来句 Only in this way can we ......) 既简短有力，又强调主题，还是个倒装句，这个结尾是万能的！！！
我是如何改模版（符合我自己的模版）（六级作文）
再介绍一篇六级作文，因为怕大家疲劳，就直接把我写的摘来了，不多废话了。
Say No to Temptation
第1段
（开头）
We are living in a world full of temptations. Due to lack of experience and determined will, many people cannot discriminate right from wrong and make bad decisions.For example, some students wallow in internet and lose themselves. （举例）Finally, they abandon their studies and ruin their future
第2段
As the saying goes, good habits result from resisting temptation. For us college students, it is particularly important to say no to temptation and form good habits.
第3段
what should we do to achieve this?
To begin with ,we students should have a strong will to say no to temptations and focus on meaningful issues.Moreover,society including schools ,adults and so on should give courses and lessons to us on resisting temptation.Last but not least ,countries should set relative laws and regulations to punish those who launch temptations.
第4段
Only by resisting adverse temptations and developing good habits can we achieve happiness and success. Otherwise, we would pay a heavy price.