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标题: 写了篇看图作文,高手们帮我改改吧!谢谢啦。 [打印本页]

作者: sunzhiabc    时间: 09-10-10 14:08
标题: 写了篇看图作文,高手们帮我改改吧!谢谢啦。
图是这样的:左边是一个老师在MARK很多作业,右边是一个小孩在DO很多作业。

下面是我的作文:



As can be seen from the cartoon, nowadays students have endless homework to do every day, and teachers the same have endless homework to mark. The situation is obvious in the stage from primary school to senior high school. In the stage, most of the sudents are minors and too much homework makes them burden heavily. Students’ interest is ignored by teachers and their parents. The current education system is not aimd at students’ quality, but only at developing their ability to perform well on the tests. A student could enter a good unversity or not accoding to his scores entirely. The deficiencies of the current education system are very clear, but the system has a strongpoint—justice, maximum justice. We are all worried about interference with the opportunities of educated. There are many elements of the interference, for example, money, a power, status and so on. In sum, although the current education system has some deficiencies, we should be keep it before find a better way.


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