原帖由 linjie21 于 2009-3-29 16:43 发表
Love is the foundation of marriage, love（这个词，你放在这里当形容词吗？去掉为好） marriage is a guarantee。When someone looking（这个地方不对，如果用someone就要加个is,或者直接去掉someone这个词） for love at the time, ten thousand thousand election pick, always feel that there are other（要用复数形式） better。However, what finally are of no avail, because in the process of looking for the best missed（句子不通）。With this experience, in dealing with marriage, because of（because of 后面只能跟名词而不能跟句子） fear will continue to look for a miss, in order to not empty-handed, on a random rather than a poor makeshift（这句话缺少主语） 。
Of（改为In) marriage (加there)are a lot of people have this attitude，Casual inappropriate because then（they) married and separated from the other may be a lot of will lead to all kinds of questions，Waste a lot of time at the wrong people。
Love is beautiful and marriage is heavenly.These are all（用both更好） part（要用复数） of a beautiful life.We should not waste the limited time,our love and marriage should be treated carefully.If you really love a person,marry him,Since there is no marriage as a result love will not last long.If you do not really love that person,do not make him an absolute commitment to marriage,course there is no foundation of love will be very painful marriage.
