【参考范文】 Term-time Holidays Should Be Banned (1) According to the excerpt, UK, in order to bring down the school truancy① levels, will ban term-time holidays. The cheaper cost is the main reason why parents want the (2) family holiday during the term time, but the general secretary of the National Association of Head Teachers thinks that education is more important any way. (3) As far as I am concerned, education is more important, and parents shouldn’t jeopardize② their children’s education and take their children out for holiday during term time. (4)First, for parents, they should set a good example, realizing that education comes first. Just imagine, if you, as a parent, can (5)ask for a leave for your kids just for a cheaper holiday, how can you require your children to understand the importance of schooling and studying? Education is so important for children’s growth and development that parents, instead, should encourage their children to follow the school schedule. (6)Second, for the children, to take a holiday during term time means that they should spend more time later to catch up with other students, which will in result③ lead to more study burden. (7)Thirdly, school is an educational institution which operates well only if all students can follow its rules and their parents can cooperate④ with the teachers and the school. Taking a child out of school during school session⑤will disturb the work of the school and finally influence the whole education system. (8)All in all, taking children out of school during term time just for the sake of⑥ a cheaper holiday is an irresponsible behavior and should be banned. | 【行文点评】 (1)第一段总结材料内容,英国政府将禁止家长在学校上课期间带小孩出去旅行。 (2)family holiday家庭假期。 (3)通过As far as I am concerned,表明自己的观点:父母不应该在上课期间带孩子出去旅游。 (4)从父母的角度出发,指明该行为会影响孩子学习的态度。 (5)ask for a leave请假。 (6)从孩子的角度出发,表明该行为会加重孩子的学习负担。 (7)从学校的工作开展出发,说明该行为给教育工作带来的影响。 (8)最后一段重申观点,指出父母为了省钱,在学校上课期间带孩子出去旅游是一种不负责任的表现。 |